英文高手请来帮帮忙

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请问下面这段话有没有语病或者表达不清的,帮忙修改一下

Hello!I always wish to join XXXX company.
I graduated from Tianjin university of technical of the year 2006 . At the school time , I learn much expert knowledge , such as Digital electron, Analogue electron, signal and system, C program, principle of communication , structure of data, arithmetic of computer , physical optical, computer network, media, EDA&DSP ,special English etc. Afer my graduation , I learn the construction of oscillometer and the usage method of curren t measure equipment at work time . I aslo have the experience of ERP using . I use to work as a TE , testing the vibration motor of mobile phone , for founding out reason of the badness , and then inprove the production.
All of this from practice to work normally , I was always able to fit in with the job quickly . I believe I can conpetent for Manufacturing Test Engineer . I send both my resume and correlative material . I wish I am the great competitor of th

第一句就不是很好噢,不要用wish比较好。
还有大学的名字,你确定是那样么。。。不是tianjin University of Technology么。
Hello!I always wish to join XXXX company.
I graduated from Tianjin university of technical of the year 2006 (in 2006). At the school time , I learn (have learned/learnt) much expert knowledge , such as Digital electron, Analogue electron(这里你想说什么,应该不会用electron这个词), signal and system, C program(你是说program designing么), principle of communication , structure of data, arithmetic of computer , physical optical, computer network, media, EDA&DSP ,special English etc. Afer my graduation , I learn(learnt) the construction of oscillometer and the usage method (method of usage 或只留usage)of current measure equipment at work time . I also have the experience of ERP using . I use(used) to work as a TE , testing the vibration motor of mobile phone , for founding(finding) out reason (reasons) of the badness (errors), and then inprove (improve)the production.
All of this from practice to work normally (p