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Why Should Have Military Training?

When I entered into university, the first thing I did was to receive military training. Days were awful: we got up early in the morning and practiced standing and walking all the time. I even wondered what on hell we could get by broiling in the hot sun all day long? So I always asked for sick leave to avoid it. I was so proud for my petty trick until the parade came. All my classmates were excited about it and only I lost my chance to be in. I felt so lost and became reflected on the significance and the benefits of military training.
Why should we have military training? As we know, military training is a special component of national defense. Its objective is to train the young people to be the reserves of the country. Just think of it, what if a country doesn’t have reserves? How huge the national defense expenses would be if it wants to guarantee its safety. Not to mention, it is almost impossible to

Why Should Have Military Training?
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When I entered into university, the first thing I did was to receive military training. Days were awful: we got up early in the morning and practiced standing and walking all the time.

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I even wondered what on hell we could get by broiling in the hot sun all day long?
So I always asked for sick leave to avoid it. I was so proud for my petty trick until the parade came. All my classmates were excited about it and only I lost my chance to be in. I felt so lost and became reflected on the significance and the benefits of military training.

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Why should we have military training? As we know, military training is a special component of national defense. Its objective is to train the young people to be the reserves of the country. Just think of it, what if a country doesn’t have reserves? How h