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我最近需要做一个poster,需要使用英文写一篇关于男女不平等（prejudice）文章。
我写了关于男女平等的释义和例子还有我的感想。下面是我的文章。
Equality between the sexes
What is gender equality? It means men and women having the same rights and obligations, and everyone having the same opportunities in society. Gender equality is also about justice and about sharing responsibilities, both in family and society.
In the past, we saw a lot of not equal things to the female in the society. Such as voting right, lower pay and low position in family. Even now, sometime we still see some not equality case in the community. I remember I red story talk about woman encounter sex discrimination in her company. She was a very working hard and processing matter very well person. She work in that company for three years, but never higher or equal treatment as the male colleague, only because she was the only one female in the company. Inside my angle, we should not have in any motion or spiritual discrimination to the female. Majority of fe
我写了关于男女平等的释义和例子还有我的感想。下面是我的文章。
Equality between the sexes
What is gender equality? It means men and women having the same rights and obligations, and everyone having the same opportunities in society. Gender equality is also about justice and about sharing responsibilities, both in family and society.
In the past, we saw a lot of not equal things to the female in the society. Such as voting right, lower pay and low position in family. Even now, sometime we still see some not equality case in the community. I remember I red story talk about woman encounter sex discrimination in her company. She was a very working hard and processing matter very well person. She work in that company for three years, but never higher or equal treatment as the male colleague, only because she was the only one female in the company. Inside my angle, we should not have in any motion or spiritual discrimination to the female. Majority of fe
1，not equal things－－没有这样说的，我觉得改为unfair things较好
2，I remember I red story talk about ...－－什么？
3，She was a very working hard and processing matter very well person.---可改为She's a person who...或者She's a hard working person...;processing matter --你要说什么呢，是说她善于处理问题，还是什么？没有这种说法，可考虑另换他词来表示。
4，but never higher or equal treatment as the male colleague, －－－是要说她从未有过同等待遇是吗？我觉得可改为but never been treated equally as the male colleagues, so let the highly appreciated things alone.(so let...alone 更别说...)
5,inside my angle----什么意思？
后面还有很多需要改进的地方，建议先自己检查2、3遍，再放到这里，否则太多了，没法改了。
（个人建议，仅供参考，谢谢)
第二段，not equal,改成unequal 第二行 lower position
后面还有好多要改的，我没时间了。以后帮你看。
about justice and sharing responsibilities
She worked