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Do you think it would be better to live in Guangzhou or huizhou?
I think it would be better to live in huizhou. The environment of huizhou is far more better than Guangzhou. I can breath fresh air every day in huizhou. Further more, the transportation is not so busy as Guangzhou, further more, people can buy a bigger house in huizhou with less money/
我是想从三方面说明问题的：1、环境 2、交通 3、房价
但是表达很不地道，麻烦帮我修改一下，谢谢！
I think it would be better to live in huizhou. The environment of huizhou is far more better than Guangzhou. I can breath fresh air every day in huizhou. Further more, the transportation is not so busy as Guangzhou, further more, people can buy a bigger house in huizhou with less money/
我是想从三方面说明问题的：1、环境 2、交通 3、房价
但是表达很不地道，麻烦帮我修改一下，谢谢！
第一行把more去掉,
第二行在Guangzhou前加上that of,把Further more改成Besides,
第三行在Guangzhou前加上in，把further more改成and.
I think it would be better to live in huizhou. The environment of huizhou is far more better than Guangzhou. I can breath fresh air every day in huizhou. Besides, the transportation is not so busy as Guangzhou.What is more , people can buy a bigger house in huizhou with less money.
I think this change will be OK.
futher more重复了,第二个可以换一个,其与的都不错