UC知道Dream （加急）
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急用，可能有很多地方语法错误，求大家能帮帮忙。马上要交了..谢谢，万分感谢鸟
I want to be a doctor like Li Shizhen. I can let the human change the health. I will be happy about it.
My dream unceasing change at the same time, I also grew up. I decided a dream. I want to be admited to Shenzheng Foreign Language School. Although it is very difficult, I’m sure it will be true. I will try my best to learn English well and study harder. Grasps each second to study. Don’t only think doesn’t do. The times pass so quickly. When you was daydreaming, the Foreign Language School was say bye-bye to you. And I must know the book well and understand every rule. At last I must keep a good health and believe myself. Look, the Foreign Language School is in front of me.
This is a dream of a pupil in Grade six.
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急用，可能有很多地方语法错误，求大家能帮帮忙。马上要交了..谢谢，万分感谢鸟
I want to be a doctor like Li Shizhen. I can let the human change the health. I will be happy about it.
My dream unceasing change at the same time, I also grew up. I decided a dream. I want to be admited to Shenzheng Foreign Language School. Although it is very difficult, I’m sure it will be true. I will try my best to learn English well and study harder. Grasps each second to study. Don’t only think doesn’t do. The times pass so quickly. When you was daydreaming, the Foreign Language School was say bye-bye to you. And I must know the book well and understand every rule. At last I must keep a good health and believe myself. Look, the Foreign Language School is in front of me.
This is a dream of a pupil in Grade six.
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1. I can let the human change the health.最好改成I will help peaple to be healthy .
2. I will be happy about it. 应为I will be happy because of it .
3.My dream unceasing change at the same time, I also grew up. 应改为 My dream are always changed .
4.I decided a dream.最好该为But how can I do it ? First,……
5. Don’t only think doesn’t do.是个语法错误的句子。应该为Don’t only think things that not to do.
6.know the book well应为learn the book well。
7.the Foreign Language School is in front of me.应为the Foreign Language School is say "hello" to me.
应该就是这些了。
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