哪位英语好的,帮忙看一下这篇文章的语法和拼写错误.

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/20 01:01:00
When people think of summer, they think "hot." Well, it really is. The strong sunshine and high temperatures make you sweat all day. On such hot days, a glass of ice water may not quite satisfy your needs, so why not try some ice cream? And today my topic is “ice cream”.
To this day, the history of ice cream remains a mystery. However, many say that the first ice cream is credited to Emperor Nero of Rome. It was a mixture of snow, nectar, fruit pulp, and honey. Others proclaim that Marco Polo, a 13th century adventurer, brought ice cream to Europe from the Far East.
Compared with years before, new types of ice cream turn up every summer. Ice cream is no longer just a mix consisting of milk products, sugar, corn syrup, and flavoring. It may also contain egg products, stabilizers, emulsifiers, and other ingredients derived from non-milk substances. So today ice cream has a lot of taste, such as :chocolate ice cream, strawberry ice cream ,milk ice cream and so on. Howe

第一段：
第一句：最好改为：What do people think of summer?They may say,it's too hot,and it's a true.
第二句：可改用复句（可丰富文章语言）The sunshine is so strong and the temperature is so high that make everybody sweat all day.
第三句：On such a hot day(更合理）……
第二段：第一个词可用Nowadays(现今）代替。
However, many （加：people)say that the first ice cream is(应为was) credited to Emperor Nero of Rome.

Compared with years before, new types of ice cream turn up every summer.[这句没读明白，你可以把它用中文表示，我再试试帮你翻成英文]

Ice cream is no longer（no longer 是副词，不能跟在be动词后使用，可考虑放在句末。译为：不再） just a mix consisting of …

Then comes chocolate, strawberry, Neapolitan, and chocolate chip.
[此句无主语，应在Then后面加上主语]

第三段：with more and more ice cream shops all around, there are many places offering a cool and quiet place to enjoy your ice cream. 此句可改为：With more and more ice cream shops building around us,there are also many places to offer us to enjoy our ice cream.

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