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Butterfly,Which has colorful wings and slender cirrus,dances lightly among the flowers.
How beautiful a picture!However, when butterfly flaps its wings at Brazil,there’ll be a tornado at the USA.How terrible a picture!.This is what is called “butterfly effect”.It means that a tiny deviation will lead to a huge difference in the future.
It may be hard to imagine,but it happen among us.
Tony is a 12-year-old boy,who is very naughty,even absolutely ridiculous.One day,Tony played a terrible joke with his so-called friends.They put a lighted detonator into a postbox,waiting for the exploding.But unexpectedly,a mother who took a baby in her arms was walking towards the postbox straightly.At this moment,Tony had two different choices :
1. Tony left one of his friend who had put the detonator alone and ran away.Such being the case,the friend got schizophrenia after that.Even worse,Tony lost his friends forever and lived selt-blamedly all his life.
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Butterfly Effect
Butterfly, a lovely creature with colorful wings and slender cirrus, dances elegantly in flowers. What a beautiful picture! However, when a butterfly flaps its wings in Brazil, it may cause a hurricane in the USA. What a terrible a picture! This is called “butterfly effect”. It means that a tiny deviation will lead to a huge difference in the future. It may be hard to imagine, but it does happen.
Tony is a 12-year-old boy who is very naughty and sometimes behaves ridiculously. One day, Tony did a terrible thing with his so-called friends, which they thought would be funny. They put a lighted detonator into a postbox waiting for the explosion. But unexpectedly, a mother who had a baby in her arms was walking towards the postbox. At this moment, Tony had two different choices:
1. Tony may leave his friend who had put the detonator there and ran away. In such a case, the friend may become schizophrenia after the accident. Even