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Dear Sir ：
I am a Chinese student due to graduate this year with a B.A. from the Chinese language and literature （direction of research in news and communication ）department of the changchun University,. I would like to apply for acceptance into your graduate program so that I can further my training in my chosen field of studies. All your assistance will be highly appreciated.

I was born in a Korean family in tonghua city on.12./31/1984。 When 2003. I gained acceptance into the Changchun University on the strength of my impressive grades in the highly competitive National University Entrance Examinations, which are held annually nationwide to screen high school graduates for university education. In the four years since, I have been receiving systematic and comprehensive training in news and communication science,

When I was in college, I exerted most of my effert in study. I was also involved in student leadership activities in our class and the student

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Dear Sir ：
I am a Chinese student due to graduate this year with a B.A. from the Chinese language and literature （direction of research in news and communication ）department of the Changchun University. I would like to apply for acceptance into your graduate program so that I can further my training in my chosen field of studies. All your assistance will be highly appreciated.

I was born in a Korean family in tonghua city on.12./31/1984。 When 2003, I gained acceptance into the Changchun University on the strength of my impressive grades in the highly competitive National University Entrance Examinations, which are held annually nationwide to screen high school graduates for university education. In the four years since, I have been receiving systematic and comprehensive training in news and communication science,

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