急切的希望英语达人能够帮助我修正句子,真心求助。

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/03 01:10:38
我的outline是描述儿童不宜过早学习外语的。可是导师说我的表达不清楚就再没给任何意见,周围的同学都差不多水平,拜托达人救我,让我顺利毕业。
Ⅰ. Children learn the foreign language untimely already becomes a social problem
Ⅱ. Distinguish language gaining the import different from language study.
A. Language gains is the process being to natural and contact in large amount at one kind of language then to know this language well。 In general children acquisition being spoken language mainly to mother tongue, hear of an ability.
B. Language study is that the finger is particular pass teaching but knows language well
C. Think in general: 2- 3-year-old are children learn (being actually to gain) oral speech key scheduled time, 4 -5-year-old are children start the scheduled time studying written speech key, 11 -15 year-old are the best periods starting studying foreign language..
Ⅲ. Adverse effect of studying foreign language untimely growing up to children.
A. Harmful effects studying to mother tongue.
B. Language

Ⅰ. Children learning foreign languages can become a social problem
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never mind. it doesn't make sense at all...
i can rewrite it for you though.

it is harmful for children to learn a foreign language at a very early age because children are more adapted to their mother languages.

的确比较混乱,语法都不对头。

无从下手
建议:循序渐进

Ⅰ.That Children learn the foreign language untimely has already become a social problem
Ⅱ. The difference between the language gaining and the language studying.
A. Language is the process which is natural and contacts in large amount so that we know this language well。 In general speaking ,this points to children who learn language mainly to mother tongue
B. Studying language is that folk know language according to teaching
C. Think in general: 2- 3-year-old are special time when children learn (being actually to gain) oral speech , 4 -5-year-old are special time when children start studying writt