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Dear Sir :
I am a Chinese student due to graduate this year with a B.A. from the Chinese language and literature (direction of research in news and communication )department of the changchun University,. I would like to apply for acceptance into your graduate program so that I can further my training in my chosen field of studies. All your assistance will be highly appreciated.

I was born in a Korean family in tonghua city on.12./31/1984。 When 2003. I gained acceptance into the Changchun University on the strength of my impressive grades in the highly competitive National University Entrance Examinations, which are held annually nationwide to screen high school graduates for university education. In the four years since, I have been receiving systematic and comprehensive training in news and communication science,

When I was in college, I exerted most of my effert in study. I was also involved in student leadership activities in our class and the student c

亲爱的先生? 我是中国学生由于毕业生今年与B.A. 从汉语语言并且研究的文学?direction 对长春大学的新闻和通信?department 的, 。我希望申请采纳入您的毕业生节目以便我能促进我的训练在我选上的研究领域。所有您的协助高度将被赞赏。 我出生在韩国家庭在童华市on.12./31/1984? 当2003 年。我获得了支持入长春大学在我印象深刻的成绩力量在高度竞争全国大学入学考试, 年年被拿着全国性筛选高中毕业生为大学教育。在四年自从, 我接受系统和全面训练在新闻和通信科学, 当我是在学院, 我施加了大多数我的effert 在研究中。我并且被介入了在学生领导活动在我们的类和学生理事会中。自2004 年以来我服务在我们的学校文学协会和担任总编辑的职务。曾经出版月积累伟大经验为布局和鼻子为新闻。 同时, 我并且竭力改进我的英国和韩国熟练。最近, 我接受了CET-4 考试。我有一个好命令讲话的和书面韩国语因此我意志soonly 适应生活在韩国。 当我设法更加坚实地研自己在我的研究事业, 我需要扩展我的视觉和透视。检查入Peterson's 指南和其它来源, 。我发现您的毕业生节目是迎合我的类型研究利益。 预期因此, 这封信将开始我在明年将导致我的登记在您的节目的过程中。 敬上,