英语高手帮帮忙了:) 非常急!!我周一要递交材料!!!谢谢大家!!!追加悬赏!!!

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下面有一封写给签证官的信。有些措辞拿不太准,所以希望大家帮我翻译一下。有所比较。或者大家觉得有什么不合适的地方也请帮我指出来。谢谢!!
亲爱的签证官您好,很荣幸由您来审批我的申请材料。我叫**,通常大家叫我**。ray是我的男朋友。我在2004年暑假时为了学习英语通过网络认识了ray,我们聊的非常投机。从此以后便经常保持联系。2006年11月份ray回国,并来看望了我。我们一起出去旅游,并度过了一段十分愉快的时光。但很可惜,我们那时没有留下太多合影。从那时候起,我们就开始彼此相爱了。可遗憾的是,他的假期很快就结束了,他不得不回去,还有一大堆的工作等着他。他回去之后,我们几乎天天打好几个电话,上网聊天发邮件等等。但即便如此,我们仍旧非常思念对方。这让我们彼此都非常痛苦。我非常高兴ray邀请我去新西兰看他,让我可以在这样一个美丽的国家和我心爱的人再次度过一段美好的时光!
这个对我来说很重要.希望大家真的想帮我就不要用电脑或者翻译工具给我乱翻译.拜托!我不是英语白痴.谢谢热心的朋友们!God bless us!

Dear visa officer Hello, I am honored by your approval to the application. My name ** ** Often people ask me. Ray is my boyfriend. I am here to learn English in 2004 through the summer ray understand the network, we very silly speculation. Since then will maintain regular liaison. November 2006 ray home, and to call me. Join us for travel, and spent a very pleasant time. But unfortunately, we did not leave much time photo. Since then, we started to love each other by. He is said to be, he quickly ended the holidays, he had to go back, there is a lot of work waiting for him. After his return, we almost every day to lay a few telephone calls, mail and so on the Internet chat fat. Even so, we still miss each other very much. This has enabled us to share very painful. I am very glad that I was invited to New Zealand to see if he ray. Let me be in such a beautiful country and I love the people once again through a wonderful opportunity!
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