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Boys and girls
May I have your attention please!
I am very glad to tell you that we will have a trip to Dameisha beach on Sunday (March 25th).We will go there by bus and set out at 8:00am.It will take us one and a half hours to get there,that means we will arrive at 9:30am.
You can enjoy yourselves by flying kites,swimming and taking photos until we get back at 4:00pm.
Thank you!

March 23rd
on sunday, March 25th, we are going to Dameisha beach by bus. we will depart at 8:00 am and arrive at 9:30. there we can fly kites, swim and take photos. at 4:00 pm we will return!
wish you a good time!
yours ***