请高手帮我改一下语法

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Dream is a strength, it can give us confidence, Dream is a sunshine, it can give us warm. Dream is to point the sail light, it can give the ship guide line direction that sails in the ocean. Dream is a bridge, it makes us arrive successful other shore.

Dream is (power), （and）it can give us confidence,
Dream is (sunshine), (and)it can give us warm.
Dream is (the sailing light ), (and )it can guide the shipto cross the ocean.
Dream is a bridge, (and it can lead us to the successful destination.)
希望能给予帮助。

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