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来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/31 22:42:25
Dear Sir/ Madam,

In reply to your advertisement, I respectfully offer my services for the position. My outstanding record at school and some experience in design has prepared me for the work you are calling for. Enclosed is my resume.
Above all, I master PRO/E and CAD. And I have completed several projects independently which created good economic returns for the company. Furthermore, I also constantly improve myself to adapt to the rapid change of the time, so I am familiar with computer knowledge and LAN management. In my spare time, I learn English and electrical knowledge.
I would like to make a change now, because I can go no further in my present job. I feel that my ability and my training should enable me to advance into a better and more responsible position, and it appears that this will not be forth-coming at my present position.
Deeds speak louder than works. I’m confident that employing me is a kind of investment for you. Your early reply will be a

Dear Sir/ Madam,

Regarding your advertisement, I am pleased to offer my services to the position. I have the outstanding record at school and have the relevant experience as well in design. I am sure that I will be qualified for the vacancy which you are looking for. Enclosed please find my resume.
Except the above, I mastered PRO/E and CAD and I also have completed several projects independently which brought a good economic returns for the company. Furthermore, I also constantly improve myself to adapt to the rapid change of the time, so I am familiar with computer knowledge and LAN management. In my spare time, I learn English and electronic knowledge.
I would like to change my job now, as I can't go further on my present job. I have confidence that my abilities and experience can enable me to join in a better and challengable position that it can't be forth-coming at my present position.
Deeds speak louder than works. I’m confident that you