UC知道儿子要参加英语演讲,请帮忙看看这篇演讲有什么问题
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请看看我的这篇演讲有什么问题 还有什么要补充的 谢谢了!
Good morning everyone,I am *** ,I am from DADIkidgarden. I am six years old. I like sea animal very much,so my English name is fish .I always dream I become a fish swimming in the sea, "是不是很好笑"怎么翻译.
I like drawing and playing the piano, tomorrow I want be a scientist,protect our earth. Next I'll say a story for you. The story name is ......
有没有什么语句错误和要补充的地方 谢谢了
Good morning everyone,I am *** ,I am from DADIkidgarden. I am six years old. I like sea animal very much,so my English name is fish .I always dream I become a fish swimming in the sea, "是不是很好笑"怎么翻译.
I like drawing and playing the piano, tomorrow I want be a scientist,protect our earth. Next I'll say a story for you. The story name is ......
有没有什么语句错误和要补充的地方 谢谢了
一、kidgarden写错了，应该是：kindergarten
二、不是SAY A STORY，是 tell you a story.这句改为： Next I'll tell you a story.
三、是不是很好笑：It is funny, isn't it?
四、sea aminal 改成： marine animals 注意用复数：animals.
别的没有什么了。
其中最主要的是： tell you a story!
animal 是复数！！！！ 你说sea animal 也行，但必须是aminals.
对于六岁的孩子来说不错了
是不是很好笑：Is it funny？
不错 不错
Good morning everyone,I am *** ,I am from DADI (kindergarten). I am six years old. I like sea (animals) very much,so my English name is fish .I always dream (that)I become a fish swimming in the sea, It is funny, isn't it?
I like drawing and playing（删除） piano, （删除） I want （to）be a scientist(in the future),(and)protect our earth. Next I'll (tell you) a story .(The title) is ......
应该是i want to be..
因为是WANT TO DO STH.
ke yi