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My cousin's bedroom
For a long time,it has always been an "advanture" to visit my cousin's bedroom. The first thing you will notice when you enters his room is the creepiness of the room. Entirely Blackness is all you can see,the wall,the bed and the table,which gives a overwhelming depressed feeling.The next thing you will find is that the room seems like an extremely big,empty open space because there is a huge mirror on one side of the black wall. It exagerates hollowness and lonliness of the room.
For a long time,it has always been an "advanture" to visit my cousin's bedroom. The first thing you will notice when you enters his room is the creepiness of the room. Entirely Blackness is all you can see,the wall,the bed and the table,which gives a overwhelming depressed feeling.The next thing you will find is that the room seems like an extremely big,empty open space because there is a huge mirror on one side of the black wall. It exagerates hollowness and lonliness of the room.
For a long time,it has always been an "advanture"【advanture应该是adventure】 to visit my cousin's bedroom. The first thing you will notice when you enters【s去掉】 his room is the creepiness【查不到这个字，你想表达什么意思？】 of the room. Entirely Blackness is all you can see,the wall,the bed and the table,which gives【which gives改成are giving】 a overwhelming depressed【改成depressing】 feeling.The next thing you will find is that the room seems like an extremely big,empty open space because there is a huge mirror on one side【side去掉】 of the black wall. It exagerates hollowness and lonliness of the room.
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