这几句话(英语)要怎么改更通顺呢?~

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My undergratuade period will be accomplished in XX university in june,2007;
---我将于2007.6月毕业于XX大学.
when i was junior, i realized that I cann’t extend my energies in all directions ,so I concentrated more in database technology.
当我大三时,我意识到,我不能把精力投入在(专业的)所有方向上,所以我集中精力学习数据库技术.

我将于2007.6月毕业于XX大学:
My undergratuade period in XX university will be accomplished in June,2007.

当我大三时,我意识到,我不能把精力投入在(专业的)所有方向上,所以我集中精力学习数据库技术.
When i was junior, i realized that i could't put my energies to all directions of my major, so i concentrated in database technology.

I am graduating from xx university in June, 2007

When I was in my junior year in college, I realized that I have to concentrate my study in database technology instead of spread my energy to all directions due to limited time I have.