UC知道求助：我刚写完简单的英语自我介绍。请大家来帮我找出错误。感激不尽啊。
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. Very happy can meets in here and everybody. I graduate
from XX second high school study, I now long am practicing the machine
shop to go to work. My hobby very widespread: Accesses the net, the
basketball, chats, hoped my performance can give everybody to bring
joyfully.
汉语对照
大家好。我的名字叫XXX，我来自美丽的湖南省，娄底。很高兴能在这里与大家见面。我毕业于XX第二中学，我现在在长练机械厂上班。我的爱好很广泛：上网、篮球、聊天、希望我的表现能给大家带来快乐。
自我介绍口语话点就行不过你每句话都有问题。1My name is called 你直接My name is 或者My name called
2beautiful Hunan Province前要加the
3Very happy can meets in here and everybody改SO happy can meet everybody here 。
4I graduate
from XX second high school study, I now long am practicing the machine
shop to go to work. 改 I graduate
from XX second high school , now I work in a machine factory.
.
5My hobby very widespread: Accesses the net, the
basketball, chats, hoped my performance can give everybody to bring
joyfully. 改
My hobby is very widespread: surffing the net, playing
basketball, chating. May my performance can bring everybody happiness.
我在你的基础上重新帮你翻译了
Hello, everyone. My name is XXX. I come from the beautiful province---Hunan. It is my pleasure to be here. I graduated from XXX second high school, and I am working in Changlian machinery factory now. My hobbies are widespread: surfing the internet, playing basketball, chatting etc. I