我是一个英语初学者，所以有时候不能很好地表达自己想说的，有什么不对的地方希望你能见凉

典型的Chi-english!而且时态不一致!

这样会比较好:Sometimes I cannot express myself properly,becsuse I am a new learner.So I hope you don't mind if I say something wrong.

(既然用英语说了,当然是english learner啦,不必时时把english翻译在句子里,口语就更没必要了)
希望可以帮上你!

I am a new English leaner,so sometimes I couldn't express what I'd like to say.If there is something wrong with me ,please pardon me .