看看这几句话有没有错误~~

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/10 20:15:58
老师要每位同学都组织一次游戏,下面这几句话有错误吗?大家有什么好的建议么~~~~?

Today I will play a game with you.
The game's name is Word Race.
First I need four people to play this game.
Please keep to the rules of a game.
Who will like to play this game?
Whoever win get a prize.
he is Win the first prize.Congratulations, thank you!

这样改吧
Today i'd like to introduce a game to you
It's called Word Race
Four people can take part in the game
Please keep to the rules
Who'd like to take part in the game?
Whoever wins can get a prize
He's the champion! Now here's your prize. Congratulations, thank you for your paticipance!

i will play a game with you ,today.
the name of the game is word race.
this game needs four people.
keep it for others,please.
who likes play this game.
...
he wins the ...
我的能力只能做这样的修改了,最后一句IS和WIN我感觉不能一起用。

Please keep to the rules of the game.
Who would like to play this game?
Whoever win get a prize.??你想表达什么意思?
he gets the first prize or he is winning.

第3句 four people 改为four student

who will like to playing this game?