UC知道一道短文改错题(初中)
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It is the day of a clear and boundless sky today .I am very happy, because our school wants to hold a Hold outing.
Morning 6.30 we multiplied by the bus of school to arrive at forest park
Then we walked around the park and looked at the flowers and plants and take photos. Our teacher asked us to name the plants, and I was very happy that I was the one who was able to name most of the plants.
At noon, we went for a picnic, everyones took a lot of delicious foods.In the end we ate lunch together. I switched some of my snacks with my friends' snacks. After the picnic, we carried on a class meeting, discuss what is seen and heard of this outing.
I am very happy when I got home, and I have learned a lot during the field trip (the outing).
It is the day of a clear and boundless sky today .I am very happy, because our school wants to hold a Hold outing.
Morning 6.30 we multiplied by the bus of school to arrive at forest park
Then we walked around the park and looked at the flowers and plants and take photos. Our teacher asked us to name the plants, and I was very happy that I was the one who was able to name most of the plants.
At noon, we went for a picnic, everyones took a lot of delicious foods.In the end we ate lunch together. I switched some of my snacks with my friends' snacks. After the picnic, we carried on a class meeting, discuss what is seen and heard of this outing.
I am very happy when I got home, and I have learned a lot during the field trip (the outing).
It is a day of a clear and boundless sky today .I am very happy, because our school will hold a Hold outing.
At 6.30 a.m. we took the school bus to the forest park.
Then we walked around the park and looked at the flowers and plants ,taking photos. Our teacher asked us to name the plants, and I was very happy that I was the one who was able to name most of the plants.
At noon, we went for a picnic, everyone took out a lot of delicious food.In the end we had our lunch together. I exchanged some of my snacks with my friends. After the picnic, we carried on a class meeting, discussing what had been seen and heard on this outing.
I was very happy when I got home, and I have learned a lot during the trip (the outing).