帮忙翻译几句话（翻译成英语）

Now the summer comes, the weather become hotter and hotter, we can change to wear the thin cloth properly, notice the eating habit and the nutrition balance. What's more, we need to do some exercise, enjoy the fresh air, study hard, and prepare for the final exam.

The summer is coming and the weather is turning hotter, so we should wear fewer clothes, pay attention to the habits of eating and the balance of nutrition. Moreover, we'd better exercise more, enjoy the fresh air, study harder to prepare for the final exam.
一楼有一些不大对的地方

现在立夏已过，天气越来越热了，我们可以适当减少衣服，注意饮食习惯和营养搭配。要加强体育锻炼，呼吸新鲜空气，勤奋学习，迎接期末考试。翻译成
Now beginning of summer has passed, the increasingly hot weather, we can reduce the appropriate clothes, eating habits and nutrition mix. To strengthen physical exercise, breathe fresh air, to study hard, to meet the end of the examination.

楼上的翻译的很好吗