写英语文章,英语厉害的看下!

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/06 21:43:39
学校举行一次英语小测验,可以唱英文歌,或者自我介绍什么的,我决定自我介绍下限时是一分钟,由于水平有限我自己写东想西想都只有那么几句话,有谁教教我怎么写好,最好能不离题,而又让人听了感觉十分的好!
自己写了一小段中文的,请帮忙翻译下!或者有啥好的意见都行

我叫CORN,来自...学校,年龄:..
平时喜欢打球,上网,游泳,跳街物.
性格开朗十分喜欢交朋友.
愿做游戏里的英雄，生活中的强者！球场上的精英，街头里的焦点！...

大概就是围绕这些内容写下,希望大家能帮忙QQ451047168! 急!谢谢啦

I am Corn, *years old and from *.
I am studying at *school.
I like surfing on line , playing basketball, swimming and dancing.
I am a out-sider person and i like making friends.
My dream is to become heros like those in games, and strong in life, hero in the court and focus in the streets.

good morning(任何时间), my name is Corn, it is really a great honor to have this opportunity , I am studying at XX senior high school
In my spare time, I like to play ball games ,dance and shopping
. I am a kind boy(girl) , I am very like to make friends .
I want to become a hero in ball games ,I want to become the focus of court
I love my school ,I think I will succeed in my dream , thank you!
看看这样行不?