这段话是否有错

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/27 16:38:34
I’m an active girl ,so I’m full of energy , sometimes I play tennis with my mother ,that’s my favorite sports. And my favorite food is chocolate, because it can make you drown into its sweetness .In my spare time , I usually read books in the library or play the piano .I think piano is the golden key to the Palace of Music. Play the piano is the art of organizing sounds, it’s a rhythmic poem that inspires, a harmonious tone that tranquilizes ,a melody of mystery and beauty. I really enjoy music.

第二行sport
三 把piano改成playing the piano
四把play改成playing ,紧接着is改成shows
it’s a rhythmic poem that inspires, a harmonious tone that tranquilizes ,a melody of mystery and beauty这句话不太通啊

总之整段的感觉还是像从中文硬翻过来的，不太舒服

我已经回答你了啊！

Play the piano 改为playing the piano

这句话不太通啊