帮忙看看这句英语有没有问题

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/16 07:40:57
However, due to many reasons represented by the poor quality, Chinese rice only making up less than 5% of the international rice trade.
然而,我国水稻的国际贸易额由于品质等原因在世界上只占到5%以下。

However, due to poor quality and other factors, Chinese rice only makes up less than 5% of the international rice trade.
1.due to本身就有由于什么原因的意思,所以不需要用due to many reasons,语义重复.
2.make up是这句话的谓语,不需要用making.

暂时就看出这两个问题,楼下继续发挥.^_^

However, due to quality and other factors, Chinese rice makes up less than 5% of the international rice trade.