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A:Hello,Jiang ning,how are you?
B:Fine,Thank you,and you?
A.me too.In recently I did the importantance things in my life.
B:the importance things in your life?what things?It must be very interesting.
A:I help the handicapped student study after the class.Maybe you didn't know.sometimes it is very tired and boring but I am happy all the time.
B:This is very wonderful feeling.Why so?
A:Many questions ,I think it is easy but they supposed is very difficult.I must explain again and again until they can understand.sometimes they did don't understand and you feel tired and downcast.I even thought about giving up them.Howerver,Suddenly.There happened a moving event when I decided to leave that day
B:Moving event?
A:That day,The unexpected guests came,It is evidenced they are couple.They are very exciting when I come in.Suddently,the boy, who I once taught ,run toward me.He took me by the hand and introduced the couple in nonstandard Putonghuas.I

给你改了一下。 你自己做一下对比。主要的问题基本上都是语法上的问题。如果是你亲身经历的事情,很感人:)
A:Hello,Jiang ning,how are you?
B:Fine,Thank you,and you?
A.me too.Recently I have done the most important thing in my life.
B:the most important thing in your life?what's it?It must be very interesting.
A:I help the handicapped students study after class.Maybe you don't know.sometimes it is very boring and i feel very tired but I am happy all the time.
B:This is very wonderful feeling.Why so?
A:they raised many questions. For me, those questions are the easiest questions in the world. but for them, they think those are the most difficult ones. I must explain again and again until they could understand.sometimes, no matter how hard I tried to explain the questions they still couldn't understand and I would feel tired and downcast.I even considered giving them up.Howerver,on the day when i decided to leave, something toughing happened.
B:something touching?
A:on that d