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我写了一段英语教师说课比赛开幕词,请帮我看一下是否可以,谢谢!
Good afternoon everyone ! Today we get together to have the competition in order to improve our English teaching level. I'm sure everyone of you will try your best to show us how wonderful you are !
Now let me introduce our judges .They're Mr.______ from
No.3 Middle School of _____________;Miss_______,also from the same school;Miss_______ and Miss______from No.1 Middle School of ____Mining Corporation .
We're lucky to invite Mr._______ from the Education Bureau
of ___________.Welcome you ! Thank you for your coming !
Now let's welcome ___________ to comment on for today's competition.
Good afternoon everyone ! Today we get together to have the competition in order to improve our English teaching level. I'm sure everyone of you will try your best to show us how wonderful you are !
Now let me introduce our judges .They're Mr.______ from
No.3 Middle School of _____________;Miss_______,also from the same school;Miss_______ and Miss______from No.1 Middle School of ____Mining Corporation .
We're lucky to invite Mr._______ from the Education Bureau
of ___________.Welcome you ! Thank you for your coming !
Now let's welcome ___________ to comment on for today's competition.
我帮你改一下，可能更加符合口语表达习惯：
Good afternoon everyone !
Today we get together to have the competition in order to improve our english teaching. I'm sure everyone of you will try your best to show us how wonderful you are !
Now let me introduce our judges .They're Mr.______ from No.3 Middle School of _____________;Miss_______,also from the same school;Miss_______ and Miss______from No.1 Middle School of ____Mining Corporation .
We're lucky to invite Mr._______ from the Education Bureau of ___________.Welcome you ! Thank you for your coming !
Today's contest is so wonderful,I think.Thanks for contender___（选手姓名 或者 序号）'s perfermance.Now let's welcome ___________ to give a comment on for today's competition.
可以啊 挺好的
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