UC知道帮忙看看港大个人申请～！！急！
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本人申请港大本科,需要写英文的个人申请：
内容如下：
1。选择该校的原因
2. 选择该科目的原因
3. 未来展望
下面是我写的申请。。。帮忙指点错误～
感谢感谢！！
My name is Jingzhi Cai.I love the HongKong University since I was a senior high school student.I am a studious and vivacious girl in my class.I knew a little about the University of Hongkong until one day I traveled to HongKong and visited it.
The library with millions of books,the school’s equipments are advanced, the campus’ environment is so beautiful,the teachers have good knowledge of their subjects…all of these impressed me deeply.
It’s the university that I’m look forward to,so I expect to be one of this school.When the passion for some dream is lighted up,you will find you are full of strength.
I like literature and art.Being a journalist is my dream.So I choose my major subject about this range.Everybody has his or her plan for the future.The Uinversity of HongKong is a paradise for me to turn my
内容如下：
1。选择该校的原因
2. 选择该科目的原因
3. 未来展望
下面是我写的申请。。。帮忙指点错误～
感谢感谢！！
My name is Jingzhi Cai.I love the HongKong University since I was a senior high school student.I am a studious and vivacious girl in my class.I knew a little about the University of Hongkong until one day I traveled to HongKong and visited it.
The library with millions of books,the school’s equipments are advanced, the campus’ environment is so beautiful,the teachers have good knowledge of their subjects…all of these impressed me deeply.
It’s the university that I’m look forward to,so I expect to be one of this school.When the passion for some dream is lighted up,you will find you are full of strength.
I like literature and art.Being a journalist is my dream.So I choose my major subject about this range.Everybody has his or her plan for the future.The Uinversity of HongKong is a paradise for me to turn my
"I love the HongKong University since I was a senior high school student"----->"I have been loving the HongKong University since I was a senior high school student"
"It’s the university that I’m look forward to"----->"It’s the university that I’m looking forward to"
"so I expect to be one of this school"----->"so I expect to be a member of this big family"