UC知道各位大虾帮忙看下我这英语文章有没有错误,谢谢!
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My last weekend
I finished school and went home in last Friday afternoon. In Friday evening, I did my homework. Than, I went to bed.
Second day, I got up early and had breakfast. My breakfast was egg and milk. How delicious! After breakfast, I went to park with my father. We flew the kite. At ten 10:30, we went home. In afternoon, I watched basketball match. I liked NBA and Houston Rockets. Tracy Mcgrady was my favourite star.
In Sunday, I read a novel called Haidiliangwanli. It was interesting. In evening, I went to bed early.
It was a happy weekend!
I finished school and went home in last Friday afternoon. In Friday evening, I did my homework. Than, I went to bed.
Second day, I got up early and had breakfast. My breakfast was egg and milk. How delicious! After breakfast, I went to park with my father. We flew the kite. At ten 10:30, we went home. In afternoon, I watched basketball match. I liked NBA and Houston Rockets. Tracy Mcgrady was my favourite star.
In Sunday, I read a novel called Haidiliangwanli. It was interesting. In evening, I went to bed early.
It was a happy weekend!
My last weekend
I finished school and went home last Friday afternoon. On Friday evening, I did my homework. Then, I went to bed.
The second day, I got up early and had breakfast. My breakfast was an egg and some milk. How delicious! After breakfast, I went to the park with my father. We flew the kite. At 10:30, we went home. In the afternoon, I watched a basketball match. I liked NBA and Houston Rockets. Tracy Mcgrady was my favourite star.
On Sunday, I read a novel called Haidiliangwanli. It was interesting. In the evening, I went to bed early.
It was a happy weekend!
第四行was是不是该改成were？还有egg是不是该用复数？