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Should the gala be continued
With the development of entertaning industry，watching Spring Festival gala has already become an important part of our
celebration，which has been continued for about twenty years.
In my memory,watching gala ,eating a huge feast and playing fireworks with family members together are the most impressive events in Spring Festival.
But now,many people are standing against its continueing.Their reasons seem somewhat been favorable to society.They said that the gala cost an enormous number of monet which could be better spent in more meaningful places.They also think the gala is getting more and more boring every year.
In my opinion,however,the gala should be continued.Firstly,it's the best opportunity for family members to get together.Every one is busy working that even has no time to communicate with one's family members.Sometimes,being together the process itself is good enough to please your parents who have be
With the development of entertaning industry，watching Spring Festival gala has already become an important part of our
celebration，which has been continued for about twenty years.
In my memory,watching gala ,eating a huge feast and playing fireworks with family members together are the most impressive events in Spring Festival.
But now,many people are standing against its continueing.Their reasons seem somewhat been favorable to society.They said that the gala cost an enormous number of monet which could be better spent in more meaningful places.They also think the gala is getting more and more boring every year.
In my opinion,however,the gala should be continued.Firstly,it's the best opportunity for family members to get together.Every one is busy working that even has no time to communicate with one's family members.Sometimes,being together the process itself is good enough to please your parents who have be
They said that the gala cost an enormous amount of money(a number of 只能修饰可数名词复数)
Every one is busy working so that we have little time to communicate with each other.
In a word,the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.(outweigh更简洁)