英语短文纠错(真诚求助)

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/05 13:46:44
Dear editor,
I'm Li Hua from Beijing Yangguang Middle School.I'm writing to tell you my experience of last Friday.
The weather was wide and cool last Friday.When got to home on the road,a advertising boardpulled down me.My leg was hurt by the board.A kind person helped me to the hospital,but he didn't want to tell me his name .
only remember his car's number:"Beijing-Z 10010".I hope you can help me to find the kind person.
I would greatly appreciate it if anyone can offer the help.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
评分:9(满分15分)
高手帮忙看一看,把错误纠出来。
过几天就高考了,想再发现点问题解决掉.
谢谢大家了!

建议，但并不一定是错误
When got to home on the road改为：On the road of getting home

a advertising boardpulled down me:在down后面加上to

A kind person helped me to the hospital:A kind-hearted person helped me to go to the hospital

only remember his car's number改为：Only remembering ...

I would greatly appreciate it if anyone can offer the help:去掉it
并且改为if anyone could provide me with some information.

差不多就这些，过两天我也要高考了，一起加油吧！

Dear editor,
I'm Li Hua from Beijing Yangguang Middle School.I'm writing to tell you my experience of last Friday.
It was wide (???)and cool last Friday.On my way home,an advertising board fell down and hit me. My leg was hurt by the board.A kind person helped me to the hospital,but he didn't want to tell me his name .
I only remember his car's number:"Beijing-Z 10010".I hope you can help me find the kind person.
I would greatly appreciate it if anyone can offe