麻烦指点下，这段话中的错误，如果可能简单写下为什么错了2。

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Firstly, When I arrive if someone come with me at airport. then what kind of traffic facility we'll take? Secondly, Could I have a individual room with a

kitchen. Finally, I really expect to have a lot of perisons from various nationality. I'm dying to make foreign friends.

Firstly, When I arrive if someone come with me at airport. then what kind of traffic facility we'll take? Secondly, Could I have a individual room with a kitchen. Finally, I really expect to have a lot of perisons from various nationality. I'm dying to make foreign friends.
我觉得你整个的话，都不是很通。虽然看得懂意思，不过读起来就是不顺。
第一句话，我看不懂。你是不是想说 是不是有人来为你接机？如果是的话，就这样说 When i arrive at the airport, will some one there to pick me up? 第二句，what kind of traffic facility will you take?不是WE WILL TAKE.后面一句可以啊。最后一句，I really welcome people from various countires, expecting to make friends with them.

个人意见哦！

come-comes (someone是不定代词,接单数形式动词)
a-an(后接元音开头的单词)
nationality-nationalities(不同的国籍用复数)

呵呵..我只能从你写的大概猜出你想要表达的意思..
Firstly, what sort of transportations will we be taking (assuming i'm traveling with one other person)after we arrived at the airport.
Secondly, is it possible for me to have an individual room with a kitchen?
Last but not least,i&