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One day ,Tom and his friends was playing with a cat in a room .There is a beautiful blue glass on the table. When he was trying to catch a cat. Tom hit the glass and broke it into piece.He began to cry . He was afarid that his father will beat him .
John , one of his friend ,said,"Never mind .Tell your father the cat broke the glass." And Tom said ,"No,no! I will never say a lie ."When his father came back home .Tom told him that he had done. His father did not beat him.Instead ,he was much glad that his son had told him the truth.
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两个人在和猫玩呢,然后搞碎了东东,怕爸骂,你自己看看吧~

一天，汤姆和他的朋友正在一个房间中和～玩一只猫有桌子上的美丽蓝色的玻璃。。 当他正在尝试捕捉一只猫的时候。 汤姆撞上了玻璃杯而且断掉它进 piece.He 之内开始哭。 他是 afarid 他的父亲将会难倒了他。
约翰 , 他的其中之一朋友 ,," 从不思想说告诉你的猫断掉了玻璃杯的父亲."。 而且汤姆说 ,"不,不! 我将会无法说一则谎言。"当他的父亲回家的时候 .汤姆告诉他他已经 做。 他的父亲不 打了 him.Instead,他多高兴他的儿子已经 告诉他事实。

我觉得其实有很多问题的，好多语法上的错误,来不及一一改了，等我有空帮你改。
One day ,Tom and his friends was（were） playing with a cat in a room .There is(has) a beautiful blue glass on the table. When he was trying to catch a(the) cat. Tom hit(hitted) the glass and broke(broken) it into piece（pieces）.He began to cry . He was afarid that his father will beat him .
John , one of his friend ,said,"Never mind .Tell your father the cat broke(broken) the glass." And(but) Tom said ,"No,no! I will never say a lie ."When his father came back home .Tom told him that( what) he had done. His father did not beat(beaten) him.Instead ,he was (so) much glad that his son h