按照练习写了个小短文，高手们帮忙指出一下错误点以及为什么，谢谢3！

at the weekend, I guess we should take a trip outside to see the beautiful sceneries and take fresh breaths.
as for other activites, maybe you can try to make chinese food.
I'm sure you'll enjoy this trip.
你写的真是地道的中国英语 ！！

at weekend, I guess we should take a trip outside to see beautiful scenery and take the fresh breaths.
other activites, maybe you can try to cook chinese food.
I'm sure you'll enjoy this trip.

句首大写，weekend无the to see take与see并列

seeing改为to see the
sceneries改为scenery
taking改为to take the