“当星辰正在升起,迈向虚无的黎明”怎么翻译，可以追加

When the stars is rising, heading into unreal dawn

when the stars are raising,we step in to the visional dawn

朋友第二句的主语是谁啊？我理解成了第一人称我
I set forward to the dim dawn as the stars were rising.