初一英语修改一下

she says it is very hot in Singapore.Last month ,she went to Beijing .She says(x)(said )"Beijing is beautiful.the food was (is)delicious ,the people were(are)friendy.I really enjoyed(enjoy) it !"

那就全部用一般过去时态，引用的话用现在时态就可以了。没什么大错误，就是时态改一下就好了。
she says(said) it is(was) very hot in Singapore.Last month ,she went to Beijing .She says(said) "Beijing is beautiful.the food was(are) delicious ,people were(are) friendly.I really enjoy it !"

She says it is very hot in Singapore.Last month,she went to Beijing.She says, "Beijing is beautiful.The food is delicious ,the people are friendy.I really enjoyed it!"

She said it was very hot in Singpore .Last month ,she went to Beijing.She said "Beijing is beautiful .The foods are delicious and the people are friendly.I really enjoyed it!"也是是些许的时态问题和一些单复形式.