UC知道帮忙修改填充英语演讲稿件
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帮忙填充修改下 大约能到说三分就可以咯 谢谢 ！！！
Good evening ladies and gentlemen:
I am a sophomore, major in tourism and hotel management. My name is zhangxiaozhe
I’m so honored to be here and give you a short speech about college life and part-time jobs.
As a college student, we have much time to arrange our everyday life. It’s totally different from your high school stage, you never have to deal with your lessons all the time. Everything around you is going your way.
There are various kinds of student groups on campus, such as Student Union, Walkman Association, PE Association, and so on. You can choose whatever you want. Besides, doing part-time jobs is also a good choice.
As we know, nowadays colleges and universities are no longer the “ivory tower”. It’s said that college life should play a very important role for students to get well preparation for entering the society. Thus, we’d better build up much experience to welcome the challenges from the society.
There
Good evening ladies and gentlemen:
I am a sophomore, major in tourism and hotel management. My name is zhangxiaozhe
I’m so honored to be here and give you a short speech about college life and part-time jobs.
As a college student, we have much time to arrange our everyday life. It’s totally different from your high school stage, you never have to deal with your lessons all the time. Everything around you is going your way.
There are various kinds of student groups on campus, such as Student Union, Walkman Association, PE Association, and so on. You can choose whatever you want. Besides, doing part-time jobs is also a good choice.
As we know, nowadays colleges and universities are no longer the “ivory tower”. It’s said that college life should play a very important role for students to get well preparation for entering the society. Thus, we’d better build up much experience to welcome the challenges from the society.
There
1.第二行be here and give you 可改为be here to give you 好一点
2.we have much time to arrange our everyday life. It’s totally different from your 从这一句开始原来主语是we怎么突然变成了you?
3. various 本来就有多种多样的意思,加上kinds 意思重复,直接用various student groups 就可以了
4. well preparation 改为good preparation ,the society改为 society
5.In that case从这开始主语又混了,注意把we和you分清楚