第二篇英语日记,请朋友们帮忙指正,今天这篇感觉写的不好.

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第二篇英语日记 Second diray in English at my Qzone.

June 24 2007
It is find day today too.I am unsettled feelings too.Study english all day.Looked a story about Diamond in resting time."The diamond is forever" from this story. The story"s name is"Stone in the loving." I has got to my home very tired.I played the volleyball game after supper.So tired very much.Right now ,It"s time to go to bed.

今天又是一个好天气,可是我的心情依然不能平静,我整个白天都在学习英语,休息的时候看了一篇关于钻石的文章,"钻石恒久远,一颗永留传"来自这个故事,这个故事的名字叫"当石头有了爱情".当我回到家的时候感觉很疲倦,饭后打了一场排球比赛,因此感觉更加疲倦.好了,是去睡觉的时间了.

It is a fine day today as well, but I cannot keep calm. I was studying English all day and read an article about the diamond. "The diamond is forever" comes from this story whose name is "When stone is in love". I was tired when I reached home. After dinner, I played a volleyball game,and therefore felt exhausted. Well, it's time for/to go to bed.