UC知道我这篇英文的自我介绍（求职用）有没有什么语法错误？
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good afternoon, my name is ***, it is really a great honor to have this opportunity for a interview, i would like to answer whatever you ask, and i hope i can make a good performance today.
now let me introduce myself .I am 23years old, born in xiamen,this month i graduated from xiamen University and have receive my bachelor degree .
In the past 4 years, I spend most of my time on study ,so i acquired basic knowledge of Marketing in theory. Besides, I have attended lots of Practice ,Through these I have a deeply understanding of my major.
“所以，我自信可以胜任销售工作”——我想再加上这一句，怎么翻译比较合适呢？
good afternoon, my name is ***, it is a great honor that I can have the opportunity for this interview, i would like to answer whatever you ask about this job, and i hope that my work experience can be suitable for the position that you are asking for.
I am 23 years old, born in xiamen and this month i graduated from xiamen University and have received my bachelor degree .
In the past four years, I spent most of my time to study ,so i acquired basic knowledge for Marketing in theory. Besides, I have attended lots of Practice ...(what are they ),Through these working experience I have a deeply understanding of my major.(what are your major)
我是加拿大的，不怎么擅长写中国简历。 可是我个人认为，这一次interview应该是稍微正式一些，而不应该用类似performance之类的词
我认为你应该多加一些你干过的工作经验还有从中的体会，就会更完美了。
最后祝你好运
所以，我自信可以胜任销售工作: So, I believe that I can ace the sales!
谢谢！
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So i believe me can suit this job
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