帮看看这段话这样修改比较地道，谢谢哦

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Yesterday I sang songs with classmates in CD-ROOM, we had a great time. Many students let me represent them to sing songs first, I wanted to show me shine, so I first sang . My favorite singer is Jay , his songs are wonderful, many students said my voice was the best in our class,I was very happy.Do you think so?
不好意思，不是要翻译哦。是要用地道点的英语修改一下
嘿嘿，谢谢了

CD-ROOM???????/what does this mean?? lmao

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