请帮忙改一下这篇英文作文!急!!!!

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Now i am a university student,so i have a lot of teachers.They are different .But,she,named ChenShuang,gives me a deeply epression.
She is a good teacher,all my classmates love her very much.Her knowledge is very wide.On the class,she teaches us English.After class,she is our friend.If we have a problem with life,we also can ask her.she is very kind-hearted.Most intersting part of her lessons is laugh.she has many funny stories.she always shares them with us.I know I'll remember her forever.

请帮忙指出是语法错误还是拼写错误。谢谢

Now I am a university student,so I have a lot of teachers.They are different .But,she,named ChenShuang,gives me a /deep impression/.
She is a good teacher,and all my classmates love her very much.She has a wide knowledge./In/ the class,she teaches us English.After class,she is our friend.If we have a problem /in/ life,we also can /ask her for some advise/.She is very kind-hearted./The/ most interesting part of her lessons is /full of laughter/.She has many funny stories.She always shares them with us.I know I'll remember her forever.
/.../为需要修改的地方。
特别提醒:你的表达有些“中国式英语”的感觉,建议你多读些原汁原味的英语,加强英语语感的训练!英语是一门很美的语言!

epression. 应为impression 印象,是吧?