怎样做好英文自我介绍?

Hello,everyone.My name is & ,I anm from hubei,I am 14.I am live in zhejiangjiaxing.There are three people in my family.My father is a engineer,my mother is a assiant,I am going to be a middle school student.I like eat photochips and I like drink coke.I have a lot of hobbies.For example;reading,play games,trouble.I am a lovely girl.My favourite fourite is orange.I want to be a policewoman,because it can help each other.If you want to konw me to make frieng.Please come on.
我在6.2班用英文这么说 I'm in Class 2 Grade 6.
除了介绍兴趣爱好还可以介绍一下自己的家庭成员，以及自己对英语的兴趣和学习英语的体会和一些有趣的经历等等。
Hello,everyone
My name is xxx,I'm in classX gradeX.........
接下来写毕业学校.爱好等。我认为主要是有一张能说会道的嘴~~这样才能吸引别人，当然要是演讲，外表也是很重要的，首先就是不要紧张.

Hello,everyone.My name is & ,I anm from hubei,I am 14.I am live in zhejiangjiaxing.There are three people in my family.My father is a engineer,my mother is a assiant,I am going to be a middle school student.I like eat photochips and I like drink coke.I have a lo