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my summer vacation
The summer vacation had come round again. I was happy that I could forget about school at least for a while. Lest I fool around all through this summer vacation, I made a plan as to how to spend it. First, I thought I should go over all those things my teachers taught in the previous term so that I could have a better understanding of them. Then I thought I should take up some forms of exercise, such as walking, running and rowing, to keep me physically strong. It stood to reason that with such a good plan I should make the best of my vacation time. I did, because I lived up to what I had planned.
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The summer vacation had come round again. I was happy that I could forget about school at least for a while. Lest I fool around all through this summer vacation, I made a plan as to how to spend it. First, I thought I should go over all those things my teachers taught in the previous term so that I could have a better understanding of them. Then I thought I should take up some forms of exercise, such as walking, running and rowing, to keep me physically strong. It stood to reason that with such a good plan I should make the best of my vacation time. I did, because I lived up to what I had planned.
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The summer vacation had COME again. I was happy that I could FORGET school at least for a while. Lest I fool around all through this summer vacation, I made a plan ON how to spend it. First, I thought I should go over all those things my teachers HAD taught in the previous term so that I could have a better understanding of them. Then I thought I should take up SOME EXERCISE, such as walking, running and rowing, to keep me physically strong. It stood to reason that with such a good plan I should make the best of my vacation time. I did, because I lived up to what I had planned.
改过的地方用大写了。
其他错误我觉得应该是没有了，但是读起来觉得表达蛮奇怪的，有的地方有点累赘。 你是写这个暑假吗？那用一般过去时就够了。还有我觉得倒数第二句的should 可以改成would或could，不懂你在那里是想表达什么意思就是了。