朋友的日记要修改---帮他改一下好吗?谢了

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My wife ,a nurse who work in a general hospital is a very beautiful girl.We began our romantic relationship in 2000 and it has been more than a year since she married me on May 1st 2006.We are now living in a new apartment of our own and living a happy life. My wife like children,she dreams of having a child of our own.If somebody ever asks her whether she wants to have a boy or a girl,she always answers"I want to have a girl!"To my happiness,my wife has been with a child for five months now! We will be having a baby in more than four months' time!I often think of the question that it will be a boy or a girl.I wonder.
请说明错误的原因和修改的理由,谢谢

有三句子,改为;My wife is a beuatiful nerse whow works in a general hospital.
We are now living a happy life in our own new department .
My wife likes children so much that she dreams of having our own child .

My wife, a nurse who works in a general hospital, is a very beautiful woman. We began going out in the year 2000 and it has been more than a year since we got married on May 1, 2006. We are now living in our new apartment and living a happy life. My wife likes children and dreams of having a child of our own. When asked about preferences, she always answers, "I want to have a girl!" Now my wife has been pregnant for five months! Only four more months before we will have a child of our own!! I really wonder whether it will be a boy or girl though...

我老婆，一家普通医院的护士，长得很漂亮。我们的浪漫爱情始于2000年，几年后，在2006年的五一她才嫁给我。我们现在住在自己买的新公寓里，生活的很好。我老婆喜欢小孩，她梦想我们要生一个自己的小孩。有人问她想要个男孩还是女孩，她总是说“我想要个女孩”。令我感到幸福的是，我们已经有了个五个月大的小宝宝。四个月多后，又将有个宝宝降生在我们家里。我经常想这会是男孩呢还是女孩呢！我想知道。