英语作文(修改一下)

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/14 19:28:12
题:
1人们是否应该学英语
2(1)有些人认为应该学习英语,是一种国际语言,有利于交流
(2)有些人认为不应该学,不出国没有什么用。应该学习自己的语言,如果连本国语言学不好怎么学英语
3发表自己的看法

我的文章:
With economic devolopment,Chinese people are getting richer now.so people communicate with foreigners is very often.However people whether should learn English is a problem.there are a lot argument in society.As follows:
On the one hand,some people hold that people should learn English,because English is a world language,and you need it to communicate with people from other countries .On another level,people shouldn't learn English.If people don't want to go abroad,it isn't necessary to learn English.They need learn Chinese well.
In a word ,I assume people should learn English,it is important for them.yet they shouldn't spend too much time in English .

修改一下,比如说一些主谓宾的句子能不能改成从句、关联词,还有帮我结尾,我结尾写不出来了````

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我自己写的:
With rapid progress in economy,Chinese people are getting richer now,therefore many of us have chance to communicate with foreigners.However whether people should learn English is a problem.
In our discussion,the majority of us hold the opinion that people should learn English.It is a world language which is used in communicating with people from other countries.But some of us argue that if people feel less likely to go abroad,as many Chinese do,learning English isn't necessary.They need to learn their mother tounge well,because mastering one's mother tounge is essential for learning English well.
My opinion is that we should pick up a little English on condition that we have studied Chinese well.We may find that English is useful even if we don't go abroad.