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Today is a fine day. i am on the farm. wow, what a big farm! there are a mass of grass, flowers, cows, sheep ahd a fruit garden. The flowes are of different colour: red,yellow,blue and so on. In the sunshine, the cows are eating the grass. And there are many apples,pears in the garden. I also help the farmar to plant trees. I am really happy today.

It is a fine day today. I am on the farm now. Wow,how big the farm is!There is a lot of grass,flowers and cows.Some of the flowers are red,some are yellow,some are blue~~~Under the sunshine, cows are eating grass. In the garden,there are many apples,pears~~I help the farmers grow trees. I am so happy today!

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It's a fine day today. I am on the farm. Wow, how big the farm is! There is a wide grass field,flowers,cows,sheep and even a fruit yard.
The flowes are of different colour: red,yellow,blue and so on. In the sunshine, the cows are eating the grass leisurely. And there are many apples,pea