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celebrate the spring festival
Tomorrow is the New Year's Eve. And according to the convention, we should cook steamed stuffed bun and steamed bread in north( dare not say in China, because it is a too large conception). On New Year’s Eve, we adhibit the stick spring festival couplets and “福”字 on the door and my parents are busy with cooking dinner. it’s the most importance food in the whole year, maybe it’s not delicious than restaurant food.but all of my family think a family reunion
At the Spring Festival night twelve o’clock,people eat dumpling，some of them have coin ,bean curd ,candy,rice cake… and all of them have especial meanings. For example, if somebody eat dumpling of coin whom will make a pile in the new year. Of course, it just a desire～
The Spring Festival is not end until the fifth day of the first lunar month.People go on work.
it's my fav
文章比较长，好在多数是简单句，比较容易看。改了改，也许有漏的地方，改的地方写在括号里了。
(C)elebrate the (S)pring (F)estival
Tomorrow is the New Year's Eve (容易理解成西方的习俗，所以加of the Spring Festival). And according to the convention (去掉，改成Traditionally), we should cook steamed stuffed bun and steamed bread (是想说包子吧，一般说stuffed Chinese bread就可以了，馒头去掉stuffed) in (加定冠词the)north( dare not say in China, because it is a too large conception (这句可以不要，和主要意思无关)). On New Year’s Eve, we adhibit the stick spring festival couplets (简化成we stick couplets) and “福”字 on the door and my parents are busy with (不用with) cooking dinner. it’s the most importance (用形容词important) food (改成meal) in the whole year, (加连接词and)maybe it’s not delicious than (比较级，这里有两种用法，as delicious as或more delicious than，根据意思，可用前者) restaurant food (一般不这么说，而说the food in restaurant).(改成逗号)but all of my family think (加连接词that)a family reunion (缺东西，is much better than anywhere else.)
At the Spring Festival night twelve o’clock (前面都不要，改成At midnight),peopl