高手进，改正下错误，无意中看到的一句话

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/18 15:52:09
If everyone in the world leaves from you ,but i will still stay with you and forever! 有什么语法上的错误，请枝出下

错太多了，完全是凑意思
if用的不好
from去掉，but也不要，已经有still了
and也去掉

1 leave 后面不用加from
2 if 和but 都是连词，一个句子不能出现2个连词。句意是“即使全世界的人都离开你，我也会永远和你在一起。”所以if应该改成even if，然后去掉but。

这个是连接词用错了吧。
Though everyone in the world leaves from you ,I will still stay with you and forever!

If everyone in the world leaves from you ,I will still stay with you and forever!
这样感觉顺一点

Even if everyone in the world leaves you ,I will still stay with you .

If everyone in the world leaves you ,i will still stay with you forever!

Even everyone in the world leaves you , i will still stay with youforever!我修改后的你看看