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(我刚开始学英文,被要求介绍中国传统服饰..我自己千辛万苦写了一篇文章,很担心出错,所以希望大家帮助)
(也许文章写得很白痴很言不达意..希望大家见谅..谢谢)
Something About Chinese Clothing
Qipao
The first we will talk about Qipao.It’s a kind of Chinese Clothing for women.It’s like a dress.
Qipao has about 300 years history.But in 1930-1940,Qipao became more beautiful:The dress is shorter and more fit!
So,many women liked to wear Qipao in that time.
Qipao is very popular now!
It can make the girls more beautiful.
Many people like it.
Today,many foreigners love
Qipao ,too.That’s a good gift for girls.
Tang Suit
The second we’ll talk about Tang Suit.Tang Suit is evolve from Qing dynasty —not Tang dynasty! It’s called Tang Suit because Tang dynasty was one of most famous countries in the world .We are proud of Tang dynasty –It represent our great history!
So we called the suit
Tang Suit
Tang Suit in APEC!
In 2001,China hosted APEC in shanghai.Do you see

The first we will talk about Qipao应该去掉the
It’s like a dress. 改为It likes a dress
Qipao has a history about 300 years. During 1930-1940. The dress was shorter......
It’s really a good gift for girls.
The second 去掉the Tang Suit was evolved in Qing dynasty. not in Tang dynasty
was one of the most famous countries in the world at that time
It represented our great history
So we called the suit Tang Suit 这句去掉
Do you know who they are?
The man in red Tang Suit is the Chairman Jiang Zemin
I think they were happy to wear Tang Suit!
All the presidents were wearing Tang Suits
it also represents our country's culture
Do you know who he is?
It has 4 pockets and 5 fasteners .
Today’s Zhongshan suit is more popular.
In fact,many important people like to wear Zhongshan suit for some important occassions
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