请问这2句话有没有语法错误?如果有,哪里错了?

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When my son starts homeschooling is it ok if he writes you once in a while too? It would do him well to have a pen pal in another country.
在时态上面,比如,would do him well to ...
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When my son has started homeschooling, would it be ok if he writes to you once in a while too?
It would do him well to have a pen pal in another country.
最后一句我不知道it would do him well是在表达什么意思。